A well known New Zealander.
Hi readers, today I am going to be showing you the slideshow I have done today for working from home.
What I had to do was pick a famous New Zealander and write about what they were well known for.
For this I made an animation about Sir Edmund Hillary.
Here is my animation.
I hope you enjoyed watching my animation and reading my post.
If you have any feedback or positive comment, please leave them in the comments.
Bye!!
Kia ora Shania, this is a very cool animation about Sir Edmund Hillary, I really like the characters and scenery that you have created yourself. Sir Edmund Hillary certainly was an adventurer, did you know that he also had an expedition to Antartica as well? He was also involved in creating schools in Nepal so that children could have a better education. One thing you can do is to double check your punctuation and make sure that you have Capital letters in all the right places, especially people's names. Keep up the great work, I am really impressed with your commitment to your learning.
ReplyDeleteHi Whaea Raewyn,
DeleteThank you for the comment.
Next time I will double check everything before I post them.
Bye!