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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, March 28, 2019

Writing longer sentences.

 Writing longer sentences.

Hi readers, today  am going to be telling you about some writing we did this morning called "Lexia writing" 
What we did for Lexia writing was get into groups of 3 or pairs, then we made a document and shared it with the other person/people in your group.
Then we shared ideas and chose the ones we thought were good and changed the colour if each verb, noun and adjective.
First we started with a plain boring sentence and make it more interesting and exiting.

Here is what my group came up with:

We played a game for hours
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We happily played a game for hours.


We happily played a interesting game for hours.


We happily played a interesting game of Volleyball for hours.


We happily played a interesting  game of Volleyball for two long and boring hours.

We happily played a interesting game of Volleyball for two long and boring hours, while we waited for the bell to ring. ______________________________________________________
I hope you enjoyed, if you have any feedback or positive comment please leave it in the comments.
Bye!!





Thursday, November 15, 2018

The strange ice cream truck...


Hey bloggers today I am going to be showing you some of my hotspot writing.
hope you enjoy reading!!

~The strange ice-cream truck~

I was walking down the street in the pretty autumn leavs and saw an ice cream truck, I thought in my head
“Hmm maby I should get an ice cream job soon or later”
So in another week I had claimd a job. That job was to be an Ice cream delivery truck. But a few weeks later something strange started to happen. The lights were flickering the roof started shattering.

2 days later I had quit my job and got a new job, that job was Pizza delivery. The car I got given was verry, verry messy, it had cob-webs on it and big spiders, oh!!, and the chairs were moldy, it was all gross.
The boss said to me,
“So do you want to keep the job?”
And so I said
“Umm no thanks I would probaly uh, umm.. uhh, BYEE?!!”

I got really nervous

I hope you enjoyed reading my hotspot witing. Bye!!