W.A.L.T: Write a narrative
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
In Ako Ngatahi we had to write a narrative about a video. It was about a boy opening a present that was a dog with three legs. Here is the video of the present.
On one beautiful sunny day I was playing on my play station a couple minutes later my mum came home with a present for me. So I opend it out came a dog I got the dog out and chucked it because it had a broken arm. I didn't like it but I got used to it the dog saw a red ball ant kept tripping over when he was trying to get the ball when he got it he brung it to me i just kicked it and he chased it so i thought for a minute maybe he likes me so i grabbed my crutches and the ball and went outside to play with it.
Thats so cool shania well done :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you mum
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