My amazing holidays

Hi bloggers!, today im going to be showing you my writing that I have been
doing in the past few weeks.
Here it is!!, I hope you enjoy.

My amazing holidays

Marching sleepover

In the holidays I went to a marching sleepover with my team and my mum.

First we got to go horse riding next we went to a factory and made gingerbread men. After,
we went to our coaches
house
and set our beds up.
Once we had set up we got to go outside and pat her alpacas and her horse. We went to t
he palms movies and watch hotel
transylvania 3.
After the movie we got to have an ice cream from MCdonalds.  After we went to Kmart,
then we went
training after we went to the cust pub and had tea.
When we walked in I felt sick and I went pale and wasnt hungry when we walked out I puked
then went back to the coaches house.

The gondola

In the holidays I got to go to the gondola. When we got there we were all dizzy because we were driving for so long  and we were higher than we thought. When we walked in there was a huge line but it didnt take long for us to get in one of them, the line was going quit fast because there was alot of gondolas running that day

(For this writing my goal was to: My orientation needs to be a seperate paragraph, why, sense of place - smell, hearing, sight, feeling)

But I did not finish these goals so im posting this unfinished.

I hope you enjoyed my writing!! if you have any feedback please leave it in the comments to help me add to my orientation.

Bye!!